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« on: June 24, 2012, 08:27:09 PM » |
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Yer' not it
Get dumb-ass up here
Exit FUK
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« Last Edit: June 25, 2012, 12:59:08 AM by BardmasterUB05 »
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constantine
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« Reply #1 on: June 24, 2012, 09:04:41 PM » |
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haven't seen a sendru in years - and this is one of the best!
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emel
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« Reply #2 on: June 25, 2012, 03:48:47 AM » |
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I don't think I've ever seen one, how do they taste fried??
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war is not the answer - Marvin Gaye
but it's not the question either - ML
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« Reply #3 on: June 25, 2012, 04:05:37 AM » |
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Smoke flavored, Emel, an aftertaste.
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dannen
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« Reply #4 on: June 25, 2012, 04:22:34 AM » |
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do sendru and snipe have the same habitat?
google can't find it.
I like the poem, it speaks to musical open mics as well as poetry open mics.
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« Reply #5 on: June 25, 2012, 01:49:49 PM » |
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Nice one, exit stage left
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all rights reserved
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« Reply #6 on: June 26, 2012, 12:08:41 PM » |
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Indeed, Alias n' they act like they're giving something away. Real mugs! Oh, yer' seen that at musical events, Dannen? Sabotage their equipment, I dare say! When they say "open", they really mean an outhouse, leftovers from last night's meal. Don't let it hurt yer' feelings, it's just like rejection, only you really do bend over.
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constantine
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« Reply #7 on: June 27, 2012, 01:18:47 PM » |
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i found a sendru in my cereal this morning. readings are interminably dull. the audience looks constipated and the poets only add to the intestinal distress.
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dannen
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« Reply #8 on: June 27, 2012, 01:59:04 PM » |
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dino, how do we fix that?
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constantine
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« Reply #9 on: June 27, 2012, 02:07:17 PM » |
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we fix it by creating alternative venues and alternative ways of presenting our work. we break the mold - we get creative with presentation - with format. i'm working on some things that should pan out in the near future. i am determined that the artists that have shared work together for years here have an opportunity to do their thing - on their own terms and in their own way.
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« Reply #10 on: June 27, 2012, 05:07:01 PM » |
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Vive la Dino
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war is not the answer - Marvin Gaye
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dannen
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« Reply #11 on: June 27, 2012, 05:21:06 PM » |
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interesting ... I'll tune the uke for this one
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« Reply #12 on: June 27, 2012, 07:50:13 PM » |
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could i remind some of you that other persons than those who know yr private codes may b reading and would like to know what you are saying so that if some one says "sendru" a lot of us do not know what that is
and if some ones says "smoke flavored
and then some one else says "get dumb ass up here
it all seems ridiculous
and it relects upon the persons who wrote it
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« Reply #13 on: June 27, 2012, 08:47:43 PM » |
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wish you luck
but you ain't no buk
exit fuk
wait... i like bard's better.
never mind ...
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constantine
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« Reply #14 on: June 27, 2012, 10:29:15 PM » |
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yes, bard should post commercials and jingles like a legitimate artist.
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