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May 18, 2013, 06:08:44 PM
Poetry In BaltimorePoetry ForumsDon't Go It Aloneread aloud some words of ours
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matthewjameskarendal
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« on: October 14, 2011, 11:44:11 PM »

the title is the entirety of my intent, would like one person with I to recite, discuss

i write of many things

i do not care who you are as long as you've got intelligence/heart

cheers
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matthewjameskarendal
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« Reply #1 on: October 14, 2011, 11:53:43 PM »

with none of it's context (work of fiction) here is an example.

we are the two hands of Horowitz
oh we wait to be struck oh look the
Russian lowers his brow,
focus hums in the arrangements-
one light onto the piano and Horowitz
      the audience has crumpled their programs into their mouths
   his face drawn
   he looks at the keys with eyes
         ivory      eggshells  


the formatting looks much better on paper
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« Reply #2 on: October 24, 2011, 08:38:41 PM »

Hello Matthew

This captures something of the maestro.  Good work.

C
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« Reply #3 on: November 13, 2011, 08:41:17 PM »

good poem. Why not post more on PIB?
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« Reply #4 on: February 04, 2012, 09:08:09 PM »

yes the screen can be unforgiving in so many ways.....and don't get me started on texting....ha....nice effort here, has raw emotion.....welcome
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