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« on: March 16, 2011, 02:12:14 AM »
trite retorts
of clichéd words,
everyday replies
that flutter out of lips
you pass down the hallway

iota of thought
flew out the window
with bandied phrases
and meaningless mime

doesn’t anybody say what they think anymore,
or has that become passé too?
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« Reply #1 on: March 16, 2011, 11:47:30 AM »
small talk and getting smaller. nice, compact - it works!
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« Reply #2 on: March 16, 2011, 07:02:50 PM »
why has it happened?
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« Reply #3 on: March 16, 2011, 11:48:56 PM »
Strong ending
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« Reply #4 on: March 17, 2011, 02:00:35 AM »
Thank you all, it just makes me wonder what people think of as you hear the same things day after day, with no meaning behind the words.
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