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« on: January 12, 2011, 03:24:17 AM »
I AM MORE THAN THE SUM OF MY PARTS

I AM NO LESS THAN THE LOVE IN MY HEART

MY SOUL OVERFLOWING WITH COMPASSION

EMPATHY CAN NOT BE MEASURED BY FRACTIONS

KINDNESS IS MY STATE OF BEING

GOODWILL TOWARDS OTHERS IS MY WAY OF SEEING

I AM MORE THAN THE SUM OF MY PARTS

I AM NO LESS THAN THE LOVE IN MY HEART
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« Reply #1 on: January 12, 2011, 09:05:47 AM »
and stop using all caps
say my benevolent captors
and let us talk to us again
not sure if we communicate
if we are more than the sum
of parts, no less than love
it has to be love
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« Reply #2 on: January 12, 2011, 06:34:32 PM »
Welcome to pib
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« Reply #3 on: January 13, 2011, 12:36:07 AM »
Reads well enough but as noted don't use all caps.  Welcome to Poetry in Baltimore.  I look forward to reading more of your writing.

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Chris George
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« Reply #4 on: January 13, 2011, 12:57:18 AM »
"GOODWILL TOWARDS OTHERS IS MY WAY OF SEEING"
that's the way it goes here
welcome
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