« Reply #36 on: May 20, 2009, 01:35:48 PM »
Hello, All, & TY Julie - I have been Writing in the wings, & by the grace or misfortune of personal circumstances was unavailable to pursue - chronologically - my earlier attempts at replies/responses to comments, i.e. T.I.S., when, voila! comes this marvelous, tsunamic-flow... So, though my time is yet-parceled, I feel incumbent (not incumbrant) to speak to you, the Poem, succinctlaconically:
At the outset, It was my intention to Post simultaneously to both Poetry boards, in that the keys to each Poem reside with the other; yet, surprisingly, "Mandata (Muthuh)" was left (thus far) to fallow, i.e., the sadnesses of both fly in tandem.
The "mystery" of "Jessedressy," though I am intrigued by the varied interpretations, was explicated early into my comments, & so begs the question, was this ignored, or serendipitously passed-over?
Nothing, as I have said before, ever leaves casually from my Pen!; to wit, if & when there are, "mistakes" are dispatched in an equally, timely manner, though admittedly, some of my most treasured portrayals have been "typos," which I lovingly acknowledge & attribute to speaking/guidances of the Muse.
I am about Words' twists 'n turns, therefore a progenitor of Prosetry.
"rubiauburn caracol" is (if one peers closely) an invention/portmanteau/language bridge = curls of auburn-red (tho' T.I.S. your elements of "dressage" are both astute & poignant).
As a Poet/Writer my intent, first & foremost, is communication; but further, to incite (lol) the Reader to think in unprecedented ways, investigate his own processes/views of Morlde, attempt to alter the paradigm. To wit, I am assuredly not about tangles & Wordmazes (if they be) simply for celebration's sake to amaze. I must conclude you all are aware to this dynamic, witness what I am attempting to response, crit.>crit. For me, doggerel has no bark, I am an aesthete; & wikiPoems do little - though valued for research - but to didactically inform.
Make no misstep, here; I am jazzed by what this seemingly, simple Piece has engendered; "MH" are my initials reversed, the Poem(s) was Posted on Mother's Day, you might extrapolate/intuit the remainder, as you need...she was just a girl...
I shall return with unpattons -
TY, all -