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HaroHalola
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« on: January 18, 2009, 02:11:38 PM »

Note: For the hopeful, warmth of the frigids, & friends frigid, from the colding/warming reaches of the South...   H'H./H.e.m.                                                       




What is the Rain, where
does She come from, what is Her
purpose?  What is the

Wind, from where does She
swirl, what is Her aim, Boys &
Girls?  And what is the

Snow, what does She know
to tell, to quell our Fears, hear?
What is the Sun, from

where does Her Heart burn,
with reasons for of all our
Seasons...? without Her,

the Mother of our
Hearth we are cold like the Snow
that hails upon,

'til Her return, in
the Spring does the eyes melting
thing, that softens cold

into Rain, stormy
tears not, got-Fears gone warm...and
on the Wind swirls the

tail, the message, Girls
and Boys, We’re all here if You
Listen - Wind, Rain, Snow,

and Sun, Joys! - Weather-
or-Not/whether-or-not - Loves'
Will aims for You, WON!

                               H.e.m.
                               10.23.MMviii.     
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« Reply #1 on: January 23, 2009, 05:56:06 PM »

Haro, this was a wonderful reading.  Enjoyed it very, very much.

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« Reply #2 on: February 14, 2009, 09:10:02 AM »

A great reading! I always have fun with your writing! This reminds me of a short piece I wrote back in 2007...

"Weather"

Whether or not the weather is good
Whether or not the weather is bad
We must learn to weather the weather

(c)2007 Edwin Robinette

Keep em coming! You always have an interesting way to poetry!
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« Reply #3 on: February 14, 2009, 05:17:22 PM »

fp - TY; keep Reading/Writing, Joie -   H'H./H.e.m.
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