Ace Vaun Winhigher
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Beauty is the Rose, one day to wilt
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« on: November 29, 2008, 07:36:58 PM » |
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It's not easy
To believe
It's not easy
To breathe.
I cut and bleed red
I toss and turn in bed
If I get shot am I not dead?
It's not easy
To believe
It's not easy
To breathe.
I'm not made of steel
When you insult I feel
Is that not what makes it real?
It's not easy
To believe
It's not easy
To breathe.
What is not reality
I can not see
Is death the only way to be free?
It's not easy
To believe
It's not easy
To breathe.
Strangled by belief.
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Ace Vaun Winhigher
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« Reply #1 on: December 02, 2008, 06:15:38 PM » |
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What no comments? Has this poem left you all speechless? Excellent, all according to my devious plan to TAKE OVER THE WORLD using poetry.
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constantine
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« Reply #2 on: December 02, 2008, 07:39:39 PM » |
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i think that the repetition of the one stanza kinds of slows it down a bit.
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Ace Vaun Winhigher
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« Reply #3 on: December 02, 2008, 09:54:16 PM » |
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Well it's meant as a emo mantra, Yes I said "Emo" got a problem?
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Ace Vaun Winhigher
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« Reply #4 on: December 02, 2008, 10:37:51 PM » |
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No ones a bird, and the other wouldn't mind if the world blew up.
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« Reply #5 on: December 03, 2008, 12:01:18 AM » |
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No ones a bird
I am a bird. |
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Real art is always a gift.
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Ace Vaun Winhigher
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« Reply #6 on: December 03, 2008, 12:20:50 AM » |
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I said, No, ones a bird as in no one in question is a bird, Yes phrases confuse people
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constantine
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« Reply #7 on: December 03, 2008, 12:23:45 AM » |
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which one is the bird? i forget
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« Reply #8 on: December 03, 2008, 12:31:54 AM » |
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I was the bird but now I am confused, it was a magic trick.
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constantine
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« Reply #9 on: December 03, 2008, 12:38:34 AM » |
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a damn good one, too.
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« Reply #10 on: December 03, 2008, 03:47:14 AM » |
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emus like emo, they are the punk rockers of terrabirds.....believe it or not...
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moe, larry, cheese....no, Limburger !
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Ace Vaun Winhigher
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« Reply #11 on: December 03, 2008, 10:39:04 AM » |
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You guys flabbergast me. *sigh* I'm too intelligent for this...
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« Reply #12 on: December 03, 2008, 12:30:25 PM » |
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who's a flabbergast - the emo or the emu?
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« Reply #13 on: December 04, 2008, 05:58:44 AM » |
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Do you even know what flabbergast means? Used in this text, I am using the word flabbergast, meaning overwhelmed, to say how overwhelmed I am at the stupidity of your statements.
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constantine
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« Reply #14 on: December 04, 2008, 01:04:31 PM » |
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why thank you, ace. i see you are a gentleman as well as a scholar. why do you hate me? is it because i'm a flabbergaster? i've been told that by many. you are not the first so don't get any big ideas.
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