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julie
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« on: June 17, 2008, 02:00:53 PM » |
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Post Your Poetry is for posting original poetry. A community for feed back about your poem. A place to interact over works in progress to combat artistic isolation.
IF you seek advice about a specific issue with the poem, or you want an overall "tough" critique of the poem, just specify that when you post it.
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ChrisGeorge
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« Reply #1 on: June 17, 2008, 02:04:46 PM » |
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That's reasonable, Julie. Good also that you have put a "sticky" on this thread.
Chris
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« Last Edit: June 17, 2008, 02:08:58 PM by ChrisGeorge »
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constantine
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« Reply #2 on: June 17, 2008, 03:20:52 PM » |
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sounds good to me.
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emel
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« Reply #3 on: June 17, 2008, 06:05:47 PM » |
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<< raises hand... I have seen people put 'artist's notes' before poems, after poems and in separate posts. Is there a proper protocol for how to go about this?
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war is not the answer - Marvin Gaye
but it's not the question either - ML
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doreen peri
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« Reply #4 on: June 17, 2008, 06:45:18 PM » |
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Thanks, Julie!
Sounds great to me. :-)
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julie
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« Reply #5 on: June 17, 2008, 07:29:54 PM » |
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hey Emel-no special system...just get your point across >smile<
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« Reply #6 on: June 18, 2008, 02:15:24 AM » |
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What is a sticky, Chris?
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ChrisGeorge
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« Reply #7 on: June 18, 2008, 02:43:33 AM » |
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Hi Mike
A "sticky" keeps the post at the head of the thread and is something an Admin can do.... look for the stick pin on Julie's post.
Chris
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« Reply #8 on: June 19, 2008, 03:24:05 AM » |
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cool by me julie.......that's an easy solution.....
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dave eberhardt
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« Reply #9 on: June 22, 2008, 04:37:19 PM » |
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hi julie from dave froginbog eberhardt, o hi julie
yes julie u r rite (just so u won't think i'm off the subject)
julee i have to tell u abt my recent visits to robert frost's cabin and emily d's room
+ since everybuddy's reading this and will see my thing- i am offering a prise to the first person who can identify the poem (and id the arther) in which the words "semolina pilchard" occur
call dave at 410-235-7507
also, juli i am pretty lonely today
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doreen peri
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« Reply #10 on: June 22, 2008, 05:53:31 PM » |
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hi dave... beatles... "i am the walrus"
Semolina pilchard, climbing up the Eiffel Tower.
Elementary penguin singing Hari Krishna.
Man, you should have seen them kicking Edgar Allan Poe.
I am the eggman, they are the eggmen.
I am the walrus, goo goo g'joob g'goo goo g'joob.
Goo goo g'joob g'goo goo g'joob g'goo...
is that it? I don't need a prize 'cause I cheated. i used google.
unless you wanna gimme one anyway *smile*
but maybe this isn't right... is it?
and, dave, i am also pretty lonely today
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ChrisGeorge
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« Reply #11 on: June 23, 2008, 03:27:39 PM » |
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Hi Doreen
Then you should have made
I am the walrus, goo goo g'joob g'goo goo g'google
Goo goo g'joob g'goo goo g'joob g'google...
All the best
Chris
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doreen peri
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« Reply #12 on: June 23, 2008, 05:09:09 PM » |
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hehe
googoo g'google
lol
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dave eberhardt
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« Reply #13 on: June 24, 2008, 09:07:31 PM » |
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doreen- u had the smarts to google it- so u get the prize- only problem is- u HAVE To call the #
CHRIS GEORGE-u knew this anyway
berst, dave
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doreen peri
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« Reply #14 on: June 24, 2008, 10:51:01 PM » |
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Dave... Chris was making a funny... goo-goo-ga GOOGLE
heh
I'm scared to call the number. Is this a joke? hehe... seriously.. is it your number? Or?
I've got a case of internet paranoia.
Help! LOL!
Convince me it won't be a merry prankster trick. :-P
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