HaroHalola
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"Koyaanisqatsi-Powaqqatsi..."
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« on: June 30, 2007, 12:47:15 AM » |
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the BIG kids are out
t'night blowin' their works and
shootin'-up maws for
the celebration
in violence-colors of
the Trail of Tears, and
an homage to the
candles of Rome, and N*****-
chasers, from China...
the BIG kids are out
Oh Yeah! To blow their works and
shoot pueriled rockets
where they stand between
the cherry bombs' & ash cans'
Independance Show.
H.e.m.
7.1.MMvi.
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« Last Edit: July 05, 2008, 12:22:08 AM by HaroHalola »
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"Only Thee Whom Hath Deigned To Truly Live Afeared Of The Death!" H.e.m.
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doreen peri
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« Reply #1 on: July 01, 2008, 03:12:04 AM » |
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oh man, this is a trip!
guy across the street
has an arsenol he dips in
! one summer
the cops came by, big grin
found the
boomtrash in my yard, tried to
blame it on me but it was too hard
to do, yanno? what a show what a show!
let's celebrate indepenDANCE,
looks like war to me, take a chance
on freedom by bein a bully right?
roman candles in the night
big bad BOOMS on the
world stage, make 'em
wave dat flag, stage a pledge,
put yer allegience on da edge
of a homaaaaaaageee!
can't read yer asterisks
what's da cause?
good poem
of courth
have a great 4th
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HaroHalola
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« Reply #2 on: July 01, 2008, 05:03:59 PM » |
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D. - Man (Woman), I like this alot, a Poetess after my own... "Boomtrash!" Wow-Bam! Apt for the 7.4. detritus... Girl, you be 'splayin', Red, White 'n Bruised We Is... All 'bout the "N" Word; my Kingdom for a Horth, of courth, of courth... Paz - TY - H'H./H.e.m.
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"Only Thee Whom Hath Deigned To Truly Live Afeared Of The Death!" H.e.m.
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Drew
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« Reply #3 on: July 02, 2008, 11:34:58 PM » |
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ha, these hit me the hardest.
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Whether we are often as not, as we are as is, we are often, are we not?
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« Reply #4 on: July 03, 2008, 02:19:39 PM » |
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I follow this one from beginning to end. It explodes across the page with your own special verbal fireworks and you light us up with illumination.
You get a karma point, buddy.
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Lightning
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« Reply #5 on: July 04, 2008, 01:41:55 PM » |
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You've outdone yourself on this one!! Bravo....Great read...Can you believe "a comment" from me!! Loved it.
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HaroHalola
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« Reply #6 on: July 04, 2008, 07:05:47 PM » |
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Welcome, Lightning - And welcoming you amongst the 'lightning" which will no doubt fill the skies to calibrate Fweedom... H'H./H.e.m.
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