Hello emel. Thank you for clearing that up for me

. I don't take critics too serious because as a writer you have to write from your heart. Those that get it, will, and those that won't, won't

. I have learned that writing to share and express is more important to
me than writing to impress a critic. Everyone has an opinion and last time I check we all have equal rights to express those opinions. So if my "karma" here is negative, such is life. I will continue down my creative path and enjoy the company of those joining me. As for this particular poem, it was a quick thought I jotted down to get out of my head

. I'm sure I will be adding many more lines to it. Take care everyone.